ext_15520 ([identity profile] eumenidis.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aeshna_uk 2008-08-26 01:20 pm (UTC)

The best portrayal I've seen of how Jack came to be such a dedicated guardian of the Rift. Also liked your use of the child-who-isn't seeress to foreshadow Jack becoming an enigmatic figure given to cryptic statements.

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