native superstition held that it was home to a spirit that would repel far more fearsome predators in their too-damp island's hour of need. That was a really fantastic idea to plant in there. Your descriptions of Jack's re-animating body, as well as his realisation that Gray is in his past and so done, were highlights as well. All in all, lovely work!
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Date: 2008-07-27 10:45 pm (UTC)That was a really fantastic idea to plant in there. Your descriptions of Jack's re-animating body, as well as his realisation that Gray is in his past and so done, were highlights as well. All in all, lovely work!