Oh, this is absolutely gorgeous. I think I'm in awe of the way you're able to bring so many people alive with just a phrase. It's like you've created a whole tapestry of Jack's last 100 years. And I can really feel the pivot point he's at now - his grief and the way the girl tips the balance. The whole interaction between them is stunning, and if I start quoting, it'll be half the fic.
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Date: 2008-08-25 07:23 pm (UTC)