Date: 2008-12-14 12:50 am (UTC)
This is beautiful. I love the parallel you've got between Jack and Myfawny, both creatures out of time. I particularly love this line:

But no. He was the sum of his past, good and bad and otherwise, forged in a crucible far stranger than any native of this time could imagine.

It's gorgeous and sums Jack up perfectly. Nice work!
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