Yeah - I realised that when I was polishing it to post. It was written to fit into a comment box, and it's complete insofar as it fits the prompt and gets across the twist I wanted it to... but yeah, it does read like a prologue to something longer!
Hmm. Don't really have anything further in mind here but I'll see if I can coax something more out of the bunnies (main issue is likely to be working out who the hell the companions are!). Glad you enjoyed it! :)
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Date: 2009-03-03 10:00 pm (UTC)Hmm. Don't really have anything further in mind here but I'll see if I can coax something more out of the bunnies (main issue is likely to be working out who the hell the companions are!). Glad you enjoyed it! :)