Oh wow! That was delicious, so hot and tense and wow, it crackled. Love the idea of Erik being able to feel the storm, and I also applaud you for the hint of them sometimes switching too. Whereas I love top!Erik, it's lovely to see the roles reversed sometimes (though this definitely worked better with top!Erik om nom nom).
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Date: 2012-01-29 09:19 pm (UTC)Great job! Hot hot hot.